thursday group feedback!

my feedback was great great great. really loved it. next time though, i want to record via the microphone because SO much was said that I couldn't write down fast enough. mostly, my notes are scribbles on the back of the paper but we did manage to answer some of the questions, vaguely, from the front.

is the message clear? yes - voting is easy, 9 simple steps.

is the message memorable? yes, especially because you check things off as you go.

how could it be more clear/dynamic or compelling? needs more pizazz, sharper, crisper, more full color pages, adding some music and sound effects!

visual language support the message? yes - very informationally friendly.

transitions? very clear now, but needs to be more dynamic (full color screens to fading to all white)

type and color? colors are great, maybe introduce another one for a POP! effect. definitions of each word need to be a bit shorter and bigger.

overall, it was received well. everyone keeps telling me it is SO fast - so for the last couple days here i need to pull everything out longer and work on my music so the beat drops right at the exxxxact moment. :) 

it's getting thereee.

my process book is well on its way. little nervous about my voice/grammar. i tend to be a bit informal, but i feel like it walks the reader through with an appropriate tone.